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Dumped in a Mc Donalds
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With a sardonic smile he sat
Watching her take yet another calorie-soaked bite
She, blissfully unaware, would smile sweetly,
Between mouthful and slurp.
His disdain grows, her ignorance never falters.
"Its over"
He says and he bolts.
Girl, left choking on her own disbelief
Left, sitting dumbstruck
Amongst the morbidly obese and lovestruck teens
Left with just a half-eaten burger and bereft with disappointment
Her sugar-spoiled face breaks
Left crying in a McDonalds
Watching her take yet another calorie-soaked bite
She, blissfully unaware, would smile sweetly,
Between mouthful and slurp.
His disdain grows, her ignorance never falters.
"Its over"
He says and he bolts.
Girl, left choking on her own disbelief
Left, sitting dumbstruck
Amongst the morbidly obese and lovestruck teens
Left with just a half-eaten burger and bereft with disappointment
Her sugar-spoiled face breaks
Left crying in a McDonalds
Dumped in McDonalds would make a great title of a song by The Smiths
Or The Ramones
Or The Ramones
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Ah. She had probably just found out how many calories were in the burger she just ate xD